Positive Poetry (I am connected, I am connected)

Natural Night Light Beams
Natural Night Light Beams (Photo credit: ViaMoi)

Walking on this earth like a beam of light

As I take each step, I wonder if they know me

I remind myself, does it even matter

I must be careful and not lose my way

All I want to do is be king of the world

I release my kingdom knowing how it works

The more I release the more comes my way

I ponder this abundance of the light

I am walking on this earth like a beam of light

Everything I want it soon blows my way

Now I know this and I walk so freely

I am connected, I am connected

Craig

7 thoughts on “Positive Poetry (I am connected, I am connected)

  1. Holistic Wayfarer says:

    I like the ending. I would blip the “on.” By nature of the definition, “ponder” just takes a simple direct object. But of course feel free to delete this comment or ignore my 2 cents. =)

    I ponder on this abundance of the light

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    1. Craig Kimbrough and Meditative Zone says:

      Thank you. I am glad you like the poem and the ending. The idea of this particular ending was to summarize and put emphasis on the rest of the poem. I also thought about what you said about the word ponder, and you are 100% correct. But I must say it is very hard changing it, once it is done. I am debating. Thanks

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